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Postautor: Lechoo » 17 maja 2003, 13:18

Chciałbym zaprezentować tekst utworu "Lifeline". Jeśli ma ktoś uwagi proszę pisać. Być może wspólnymi siłami zbliżymy się do właśiwej wersji tekstu :)

Can you remember that summer night
When you softly called my name
You said : “Come if you can , I’m feelin’ so bad
Will all night will be with you again”

Your husband was twenty that used to be hon
Makin’ money to buy you own car
His lovers in seldom distant even though
My passin’ by gray by this love

Lovende cryin’ side-by-side
Brought you bread hot by heart in his hand
You told me that love is never so blow
That the ways never tears on the side

Tell me lifeline
Tell me your heartline
Can you remember how we were before

Tell me your lifeline
Tell me your heartline
One said a lifetime long long time ago

Two nuns on a beach watchin’ sun goin’ down
Your eyes were decrepit away
Desirety between you deep in your heart
All in all till the end of the day

Lovende cryin’ side-by-side
Brought you bread hot by heart in his hand
You told me that love is never so blow
That the ways never tears on the side

Tell me lifeline
Tell me your heartline
Can you remember how we were before

Oh!

Tell me your lifeline
Tell me your heartline
One said a lifetime long long time ago

Can you remember that summer night
When you softly called my name
You said “Come if you can, I’m feelin’ so bad”
I came but I just know the same

I don’t really know how that began
And I don’t know why died
Well, It has come and has gone ; I don’t sleep alone
But somethin’ still hurts me inside
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Postautor: Noktowizor » 17 maja 2003, 19:42

Can you remember that summer night
When you softly called my name
You said : “Come if you can , I’m feelin’ so bad
Will all night to be with you again”

Your husband was twenty letters (?) from home
Makin’ money to buy one more car
His letters in seldom distant & cold
My passin’ by gray like a star

We loved, we cried side-byside
Breath to breath, heart to heart, hand in hand
You told me that love is never so blow
That the ways never tears on the sad

Draw me a lifeline
Draw me a heartline
Can you remember how we were before

Draw me a lifeline
Draw me a heartline
One said a lifetime long long time ago

The nuns on a beach watched ’sun goin’ down
Your eyes were decrepit away
Beside you between you deep in your heart
All in all till the end of the day

We loved, we cried side-byside
Breath to breath, heart to heart, hand in hand
You told me that love is never so blow
That the ways never tears on the sad

Draw me a lifeline
Draw me a heartline
Can you remember how we were before

Oh!

Draw me a lifeline
Draw me a heartline
One said a lifetime long long time ago

Can you remember that summer night
When you softly called my name
You said “Come if you can, I’m feelin’ so bad”
I came but I just couldn't stay

I don’t really know how that began
And I don’t know why died
Love is come, love is go; I don’t sleep alone
But somethin’ still hurts me inside

Najlepszy był u Ciebie ten fragment o chlebie :lol:
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Postautor: Lechoo » 18 maja 2003, 18:53

Dzięki Maciek że chciało Ci się pisać tekst. Dobra robota!
Mam kilka poprawek :

1)
W trzeciej zwrotce:
"We LAUGHTED, we cried side-by-side..."
2)
W refrenie:
"One SET a lifetime long long time ago"
3)
W ostatniej zwrotce:
"Love HAS come, love is go ....."

Jeszcze raz wielkie dzięki i pozdrawiam!
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